Friday, July 10, 2009

Ah - maybe I am a writer!

So - as I write this, I don't want it to sound as if I am assigning blame. because no one is to blame. Just an understanding of when the marriage really made a turn. Does it work?


Pronouns


She

was bringing another baby

into this world.


into this family.


As things eventually fell apart,

hindsight told her that she

was trying to glue things together

long before understanding

that they were broken. She

was rationalizing her choices,

justifying his,

fooling herself,

pretending,
believing all was well.


She

was bringing another baby

into this world.


into this family.


she.


Not they.


1 comment:

Mrs. Frost said...

Not sure if you're asking me or the solar system in general, but I understand that pretty well. That little pronoun confusion...